How to say "他把写的初稿 给我看了 写得很不错" (tā bǎ xiě de chū gǎo gěi wǒ kàn le xiě dé hěn bú cuò) in Chinese dialogue

tā他bǎ把xiě写de的chū初gǎo稿 gěi给wǒ我kàn看le了 xiě写dé得hěn很bú不cuò错

he showed me the draft he wrote. It's really good.

Idioms & Colloquial Expressions
INTERACTIVE SCRIPT TIMELINE
LINE 0123:19
zuó昨tiān天

“Yesterday,”

LINE 0223:20
PLAYING SCENE
tā bǎ xiě de chū gǎo gěi wǒ kàn le xiě dé hěn bú cuò他把写的初稿 给我看了 写得很不错

“he showed me the draft he wrote. It's really good.”

LINE 0323:25
bù不guò过wǒ我men们duì队lǐ里

“But on our team,”

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Source MediaTV Series
Season & EpisodeS1 E16
Timestamp23:20
TMDB ID282558 →