How to say "我把故事原型搭得好好的 他给我写成这样" (wǒ bǎ gù shì yuán xíng dā dé hǎo hǎo de tā gěi wǒ xiě chéng zhè yàng) in Chinese dialogue

shìyuánxínghǎohǎode gěixiěchéngzhèyàng

I built the story framework properly, and he wrote it like this.

Idioms & Colloquial Expressions
Grammar Patterns
INTERACTIVE SCRIPT TIMELINE
LINE 0124:22
xiě de shén me ya wán quán bù xíng

写的什么呀 完全不行

What is this writing? It is completely off.

LINE 0224:25
PLAYING SCENE
wǒ bǎ gù shì yuán xíng dā dé hǎo hǎo de tā gěi wǒ xiě chéng zhè yàng

我把故事原型搭得好好的 他给我写成这样

I built the story framework properly, and he wrote it like this.

LINE 0324:28
rén
gēn
zhì
quán
pǎo
le

The characters and tone are all off.

Show Information
Source MediaTV Series
Season & EpisodeS1 E17
Timestamp24:25
TMDB ID273129