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《Born to Be Alive》 S1·E16 (23:20) HSK 3
tā bǎ xiě de chū gǎo gěi wǒ kàn le xiě dé hěn bú cuò

他把写的初稿 给我看了 写得很不错

“he showed me the draft he wrote. It's really good.”

《Born to Be Alive》 S1·E16
TIMECODE: 23:20 · 1080P MASTER AUDIO

THE DIALOGUE REEL

1+1+1 SPOKEN CONTINUITY
[-1] PREVIOUS TURN zuó tiān

昨天

“Yesterday,”

tā bǎ xiě de chū gǎo gěi wǒ kàn le xiě dé hěn bú cuò CURRENT FOCUS

他把写的 初稿 给我看 了 写得很不错

“he showed me the draft he wrote. It's really good.”

[+1] FOLLOW-UP TURN bù guò wǒ men duì lǐ

不过我们队里

“But on our team,”

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Scene: Workplace
Function: GIVING PRAISE
Tone: OBJECTIVE
Emotion: APPROVAL
WHAT THEY REALLY MEAN (PRAGMATIC SUBTEXT)

Direct spoken expression in this communicative setting.

💡 Cultural Insight: Professional Peer Review

In Chinese workplace culture, showing a preliminary draft privately to a trusted colleague before formal submission is a common way to gather feedback and build consensus.

INTENT TAGS: #evaluating #complimenting #sharing_information
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LEARNING CHUNKS & PARTICLES

2 CHUNKS · 1 PARTICLES
初稿 SPOKEN CHUNK

first draft / rough draft

Commonly used in professional and academic settings to refer to initial working versions of reports or articles.

写得很不错 SPOKEN CHUNK

written very well

A natural, standard collocation for praising someone's writing quality.

Modal Particle「了」 (le) CHANGE OF STATE

Marks the completion of the action of showing the draft.

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VOCABULARY & EXPRESSIONS

3 EXPR · 0 GRAMMAR
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