他把写的初稿 给我看了 写得很不错
“he showed me the draft he wrote. It's really good.”
THE DIALOGUE REEL
昨天
“Yesterday,”
他把写的 初稿 给我看 了 写得很不错
“he showed me the draft he wrote. It's really good.”
不过我们队里
“But on our team,”
Direct spoken expression in this communicative setting.
In Chinese workplace culture, showing a preliminary draft privately to a trusted colleague before formal submission is a common way to gather feedback and build consensus.
LEARNING CHUNKS & PARTICLES
first draft / rough draft
Commonly used in professional and academic settings to refer to initial working versions of reports or articles.
written very well
A natural, standard collocation for praising someone's writing quality.
Marks the completion of the action of showing the draft.