这个是我的修改意见
“These are my revision notes.”
THE DIALOGUE REEL
再给我一次机会
“for another chance.”
这个 是我的 修改意见
“These are my revision notes.”
那个纺织厂的女工
“That textile factory worker”
Direct spoken expression in this communicative setting.
Providing specific 'revision suggestions' (修改意见) offers a junior or peer a pragmatic second chance without making them lose face outright.
LEARNING CHUNKS & PARTICLES
feedback / suggestions for revision
Standard professional phrase used when handing over or submitting comments on a draft, proposal, or report.