那是何韩跟林展翘 捣鼓出来的故事大纲
“is an outline created by He Han and Lin Zhanqiao.”
THE DIALOGUE REEL
你现在写的这个《似有故人醉》
“What you are writing now, Drunk Old Friend,”
那是 何韩跟林展翘 捣鼓 出来的 故事大纲
“is an outline created by He Han and Lin Zhanqiao.”
不是你的
“It is not yours.”
“Stop taking credit or getting attached; you didn't create that concept, they did.”
Using colloquial verbs like 捣鼓 slightly downplays the grandeur of the creation while still strictly defining intellectual boundaries.
LEARNING CHUNKS & PARTICLES
to tinker with; to cobble together
A vivid colloquial northern term meaning to fiddle with or casually concoct something, often mildly self-deprecating or slightly dismissive.
story outline; synopsis
Standard industry terminology in screenwriting and creative writing.
Functions here inside the resultative phrase to denote the completed outcome of their tinkering.
VOCABULARY & EXPRESSIONS
Parallel Spoken Cinema Scenes (语义近邻切片)
“bring Lin Zhanqiao and He Han over to me,”
“Look, He Han and Lin Zhanqiao are here. What a perfect pair.”
“Lin Zhanqiao and He Han came together. They're back together again?”
“Could you please stop making things up? He Han.”
“can't become you, can't become Lin Zhanqiao,”
“He wants Lin Zhanqiao to be his safety net. But that net was woven for He Han,”