你这写稿方式 跟看动物世界似的
“This writing style of yours feels like a nature documentary.”
THE DIALOGUE REEL
“Look at this title page. What did you even write?”
你这写稿方式 跟看动物世界似的
“This writing style of yours feels like a nature documentary.”
前面写看那只狮子 后面写斑马的迁徙
“This writing style of yours feels like a nature documentary. First, you're watching a lion, then it's zebras migrating.”
VOCABULARY & EXPRESSIONS
Parallel Spoken Cinema Scenes (语义近邻切片)
“I wanted to see whether this trailblazing writing style”
“Start writing. What's wrong with you? Start writing.”
“You're getting better at writing.”
“Take a look at the draft first.”
“Here. Your essay was quite good. This is my feedback.”
“I think writing is just like talking.”