《Lady Liberty》 S1·E34 (34:10)
HSK 5
dàn shì yào fàng zài fāng àn lǐ miàn hái xū yào gǎi jìn yī xià
但是要放在方案里面 还需要改进一下
“But if we're putting them into the proposal, they still need some refinement.”
《Lady Liberty》
S1·E34
TIMECODE: 34:10
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1080P MASTER AUDIO
THE DIALOGUE REEL
[-1] PREVIOUS TURN
nǐ shuō de nà jǐ gè xiǎng fǎ wǒ jué de hěn hǎo
“I think the ideas you mentioned are good.”
dàn shì yào fàng zài fāng àn lǐ miàn hái xū yào gǎi jìn yī xià
CURRENT FOCUS
但是 要 放在 方案 里面 还需要 改进一下
“But if we're putting them into the proposal, they still need some refinement.”
[+1] FOLLOW-UP TURN
wǒ men zhēng qǔ zuò dào zuì hǎo
我们争取做到最好
“Let's aim to make it as strong as possible.”
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Scene:
Workplace
Function:
CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM
Tone:
DIPLOMATIC
Emotion:
NEUTRALITY
WHAT THEY REALLY MEAN (PRAGMATIC SUBTEXT)
“Your ideas are interesting in theory, but they are not workable as they currently stand.”
💡 Cultural Insight: Hedging and Face-saving in Feedback
Chinese workplace communication often uses softeners like '改进一下' after an initial compliment to preserve the colleague's face while pushing for higher standards.
INTENT TAGS:
#critique
#hedging
#face_saving
#revision
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2 CHUNKS · 0 PARTICLES
LEARNING CHUNKS & PARTICLES
放在方案里面
SPOKEN CHUNK
to include in the proposal/plan
A standard workplace phrase when deciding which creative pitches make the final cut.
改进一下
SPOKEN CHUNK
to polish a bit / to improve slightly
Adding '一下' serves as a classic softener when delivering critical feedback.
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4 EXPR · 2 GRAMMAR
VOCABULARY & EXPRESSIONS
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