特别是这个对原型的陈述 太赘长了
“And that Guoqiang, he's not typical enough. Delete him. Especially this description of the real-life prototype is too long.”
THE DIALOGUE REEL
“And that Guoqiang, he's not typical enough. Delete him.”
特 别是 这个 对 原型 的陈述 太赘长了
“And that Guoqiang, he's not typical enough. Delete him. Especially this description of the real-life prototype is too long.”
“Redundant. Cut it. Cut it. Cut this too.”
Direct spoken expression in this communicative setting.
In creative and literary circles, senior mentors or editors often critique drafts with blunt, unvarnished efficiency to expedite revisions.
LEARNING CHUNKS & PARTICLES
especially / particularly
Used to single out a specific item or point that stands out from the rest.
too lengthy and redundant
A formal or literary spoken critique used to describe written text that is needlessly wordy.
Functions with 太 to intensify the excessive nature of the length.
