那我不也改您剧本呢吗
“Didn't I alter your script too?”
THE DIALOGUE REEL
好吃
“Delicious.”
那我 不也 改您 剧本 呢 吗
“Didn't I alter your script too?”
“I hope you don't mind that I took the liberty of editing your script.”
Using the honorific pronoun 'nin' when critiquing or altering a senior or respected colleague's creative work preserves professional etiquette and face.
LEARNING CHUNKS & PARTICLES
to revise a script
Commonly used in film, television, and theater contexts to denote editing or rewriting script drafts.
Marks an ongoing activity or background action being brought forward for discussion.
Turns the statement into a rhetorical confirmation question.
VOCABULARY & EXPRESSIONS
Parallel Spoken Cinema Scenes (语义近邻切片)
“I've read through the script a million times,”
“But at least he won't try to rewrite the script. What's the female lead's name again?”
“Now that my script is done,”
“Reshoot. The script needs changing again.”
“anyone who can read thinks they're qualified to give suggestions.”
“- Want to read my new script? - That's right.”