看的时候 我还跟二旧讨论一下 都写了什么
“While reading, I even discussed with Er Jiu what you wrote.”
THE DIALOGUE REEL
“I have started reading your novels.”
看 的时候 我还跟二旧 讨论一下 都写了 什么
“While reading, I even discussed with Er Jiu what you wrote.”
你怎么有兴趣看我写的小说 一开始云里雾里的嘛
“Why are you interested in my novels? At first, it was confusing.”
“I care about your writing and took real effort to understand what you were expressing.”
In close interpersonal relationships, taking the time to read and discuss someone's creative writing demonstrates emotional support and attentive involvement.
LEARNING CHUNKS & PARTICLES
discuss a bit
Using '一下' softens the action, making the discussion sound relaxed and casual rather than rigid or formal.
what on earth was written / what it was all about
Common phrasing used when trying to decipher or summarize broad content.
VOCABULARY & EXPRESSIONS
Parallel Spoken Cinema Scenes (语义近邻切片)
“I never expected you to do something like this for my wedding gift.”
“if you and Er Jiu fight again,”
“If I ever do get with Er Jiu, you'll be the first to know.”
“Er Jiu asked me today.”
“I should've stopped you from marrying Er Jiu.”
“Er Jiu says his feelings for me are genuine.”