如果你觉得太文艺的话 可以删掉一点
“If you think it's too artsy, you can delete some parts.”
THE DIALOGUE REEL
已经发到你邮箱了
“I've sent it to your email.”
如果 你觉得 太文艺 的话 可以 删掉 一点
“If you think it's too artsy, you can delete some parts.”
先回去了
“I'm heading back.”
“I know I might have gotten a bit carried away with the wording, so feel free to trim it down.”
Chinese speakers often self-deprecate their creative work as 'too artsy' or 'flawed' before others can criticize it, thereby protecting face.
LEARNING CHUNKS & PARTICLES
too artsy; overly sentimental or poetic
Commonly used in modern Chinese to describe writing or behavior that feels excessively aestheticized or melodramatic.
cut out a bit; trim down slightly
A polite, softening directive when suggesting editorial revisions.
Functions as a conditional marker equivalent to 'if', softening the proposal.
VOCABULARY & EXPRESSIONS
Parallel Spoken Cinema Scenes (语义近邻切片)
“we can point out anything we don't like and change it early.”
“Why didn't she just delete everything?”
“If you cut so many sung lines,”
“Can't you handle things more neatly?”
“♪ We become one ♪ Did I jump the gun there? ♪ Through day and night ♪”
“They're no longer cumbersome. Yeah.”